So! The longer I have been working on my project, the more I have come to hate pages 5 and 6. In my opinion, they had no good reason to be in the narrative. I actually should call them “the old pages 5 and 6″, since it culminated in me finally giving in and taking them out completely. All the pages after them have been renumbered accordingly. Another change I decided to make: I originally had a chapter system in place, but I decided that I didn’t really want one. I hope that this isn’t inconvenient to anyone, and if it is, I’m sorry.
Also: I spent a good amount of time trying to figure out the plural for Snivy. What is it? I’m going for just Snivy. What I do know is that they photosynthesize. It’s in their Pokedex description if you don’t believe me.
ok… ok what. read what you just said. snivy photosynthesize as soon as it gets dark.
photosynthesize
gets dark.
I think you missed the period after “photosynthesize.” What she’s saying is that Snivy photosynthesize, so as soon as it gets dark, she gets sleepy.