So! The longer I have been working on my project, the more I have come to hate pages 5 and 6. In my opinion, they had no good reason to be in the narrative. I actually should call them “the old pages 5 and 6″, since it culminated in me finally giving in and taking them out completely. All the pages after them have been renumbered accordingly. Another change I decided to make: I originally had a chapter system in place, but I decided that I didn’t really want one. I hope that this isn’t inconvenient to anyone, and if it is, I’m sorry.
Also: I spent a good amount of time trying to figure out the plural for Snivy. What is it? I’m going for just Snivy. What I do know is that they photosynthesize. It’s in their Pokedex description if you don’t believe me.